VII. Essay questions
You are the homeroom teacher of a bilingual class at TNGS. Your student, Elena, has written to you seeking advice. Please reply to her letter as Mr. or Ms. E.
Dear Mr./Ms. E,
This is Elena Lin from your homeroom. I hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing to you because I don't quite know who else to turn to, and you've always seemed like someone who genuinely cares about us
beyond just our grades.
I know you probably see me as the girl who's always got her nose buried in a novel or passionately arguing some point at debate practice — and honestly, that's the part of school I love most. Being president
of the debate club, diving into To Kill a Mockingbird or dissecting the themes in The Great Gatsby — that's where I feel most like myself. Words make sense to me. Stories make sense to me.
Numbers and chemical equations, however, do not.
I want to be a doctor. My mom is a physician, and watching her work — the way she actually helps people on their worst days — has inspired me for as long as I can remember. I've never wanted anything
else. But lately, every time I sit down with my Math or Chemistry textbook, that dream feels a little further away. My last Chemistry test came back with a grade I'm honestly too embarrassed to write here, and
Calculus feels like it's written in a language I was never taught to speak.
What frightens me most is college applications. I look at the admission requirements for medical programs and my stomach just drops. I can write a personal essay that I'm proud of. I can debate both sides
of a complex argument without flinching. But will I meet the rigorous entrance exam standards required by the medical school?
I've been losing sleep over this. I’ve been skipping some meals just to squeeze in extra studying, and I still don't feel like it's enough. I don't want to disappoint my mother. I don't want to disappoint myself.
I was hoping you might be able to give me some advice. Should I be seeking tutoring? Is there a way to structure my studying more effectively? Are there things I can do now, in my second year in high school to
improve my grades? I trust your judgment more than I can say. You know this school, you know how colleges think, and more importantly, you know your students. I'd be so grateful for any guidance you're willing to
offer.
Thank you so much for reading this far. I'm sorry if it's a bit of a ramble — debate teaches you to argue concisely, but apparently writing about your own fears is harder than arguing against them.
Sincerely, Elena